Garam garam chai ke sath thandi barish ka maja !
Ek ek boond ke sath chadhta wo nasha!
Kya wo main hi tha....
Kati patang ke piche bhagta wo ladka
Fati patang bhi mil jaye to nachta wo ladka
Kya wo main hi tha.....
Thande kuyein ke pani me jab khada rahta tha
Chanchal machhaliyon ke shprsh se thartharata
Kya wo mai hi tha.......
Pal pal bhagate huye suraj ko canvas pe utarata
Bas rangon ke siway kuch bhi na dikhta tha
Kya wo mai hi tha... aur ab
Shahar ki bhid ke sath bhagta huaa...
Roj apne andar kuchh badalte huye chup chap sa dekhta
Kya ye main hi hoon!
Kya ye main hi hoon!!
(This is my 1st attempt to write poem in Hindi and before this i think i have written 2,3 poems in Marathi. I am new to this poem thing so pardon me if i am missing out on something :) )
19 comments:
very nice painting, aur bahut hi khubsurat kavita.
Very simple composition but yet it is strong and solid stroke.If it is now here in Malaysia,this painting will be an icon for the latest popular business hit.It will also be much popular and nice if can print this on T-shirt and postcard.I love the sound of the title and I think it is lovely.May I know the meaning in English..pleasee....
Thanks santoshi :)
@ Thanks Art of My Life...
The basic theme of this post is small small things those now I m missing in urban life,
like the I use stand in water pond and that touch of small fishes to my feet,In my collage life i use to paint landscape on the spot no matter how clean or how dirty that place is, What was imp was the landscape in front of me...
and now every thing is change and still it changing...
I can totally feel the coolness of the water here...delicate fish and remembering childhood. Beautiful.
And thank you for your lovely comments on my blog recently!
In Malaysia right now,every shopping center have a small pool where you can dip your feet and small small fish will bit your feet or eating excess old skin under your feet.We have to pay RM 5.00 for this.....!!!
Nowadays people need to pay
for those nice bygone memories..
Amazing poem buddy!!! Loved it!! What made me love it more was the end part of it... So Painter babu is poem babu from now!! :)
read first poetry of yours..
digant isko hindi mein likh aur khoobsurat lagegi padne mein
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@ Tatiana
Thanks...
@ Art of My Life
Yaah, this is the truth of our Urban life!
@ Priyanshu
Poem babu nahi re apana painting hi thik hai, poem to aaisehi,zatka aajata hai :P
@ Neha
muze likhna hai hindi me lekin mere pas hindi font nahi hai,:( Dekata hoo kuchh try karata hoo.
@ James
Thanks a lot.
@ digant
aare you'l get very easily on net
nice painting and style!
Long time no hear..........!
Your writeup and illustration both are so beautiful....keep up good work..
good poem...simple thoughts yet they speak truth....really sometimes I also crave for those simple things which I used to do in the past and now no time to do them...but thanks for happy realization $ me...i'll try to catch up with past...
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